Sally's situation or Transformation my version

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Its been three Years sense the last incident sense Electro again tried to change and turn Sally into a electric being like him.

And that time he was much closer to succeding she was almost complete but again was ruined by Spider Man and cause of that he almost killed Sally in the process.

This time she was put through it so bad she ended up in the hospital she can eat and all of that but she cant walk.

Her whole body was so numb from the shock she cant feel anything she could end up setting herself on fire and she wouldnt feel it.

She lost all feeling to her body she laid there in the hospital bed trying to recover she was told by the doctors that it would take probably 5 to 6 years before she could recover at all from all the effects.

She just laid there sad and depressed and she really wanted to smoke she hasnt had a chance to smoke a lot for a while even though she isnt supose to smoke there, they let her sneek smokes here and there they open the window so it airs out quick and the smoke goes out there while she smokes they only let her now and than they dont let her a lot and it was one of those times they wouldnt let her and she wanted it

Sally "I really want a cigarette and they have to be so mean and not let me have one this is not fair " she sits there sadden cause she cant get up or nothing

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Not long after that one of the nurses came in

Sally "Can I please have a cigarette today I need to smoke please please please

the nurse looked at Sally "Sorry Sally I cant let you smoke today

Sally "Come on please no one has to know no one has ever known but you and the doctor that watches over me come on I have been very careful not to get you guys in trouble please

Nurse "Sorry Sally orders from the doc for you not to have one today

Sally "Is there a chance to have one soon if not today

Nurse "I think there is a time schedualed for you soon but I dont know when I am not informed of it yet so I cant tell you other than that

Sally "There has to be a way for the doctor to change the smoking schedual cause this schedual doesnt work for me I need a better smoking arrangement

Nurse "All I can suggest is you have to talk to her about it there is nothing I can do anyway I just got word that you will have visiters today infact they are on there way

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Not to much longer MJ and Peter Parker came along

Sally was very excited when they came

Not long after that the Nurse left so they could have private time

Sally "Hey MJ, Peter its great to see you guys

MJ "Hi there Sally how are you

Peter "Yea hi there Sally how are you doing?

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Sally looked at them "Well I would be doing a lot better if they would let me smoke today but they wont do that today

MJ was suprise "Huh well they dont have to know do they "than MJ got up and she opend the window than she got out a cigarette and gave one to Sally than gave her the lighter

Sally was suprised and happy "Oh MJ thank you your a life saver " after that Sally put the cigarette in her mouth she than took the lighter than lit the cigarette she than gave the lighter back to MJ than she took a drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew the smoke out of her mouth than she smiled "Ahh thats better anyway what do I owe the pleasure of your guys visit

MJ than got out a cigarette for her than she lit up she than put the lighter away she than took a drag she than looked at Sally "We wanted to come and see how you were doing " after that said she than blew the smoke out of her mouth

Peter "Yea we wanted to come and see how you were doing and make your day

Sally "Thank you guys so much

MJ smiles "No problem Sally

Sally took a bigger drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth she than blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth after a while she kept taking more and bigger drags sometimes she even inahaled the smoke into her lungs and body sometimes she also did nose exhales french inhales smoke rings all different stuff she than looked at MJ "Hey MJ do you happen to have an extra pack and lighter with you by any chance?

MJ looked at Sally "Yea I do" she than took a pack out and a lighter out and she gave them to Sally

Sally took them and smiled "Thanks MJ

MJ smiles "Your welcome Sally

Sally than went back to smoking heavyly she smoked through 10 cigarettes like that and than after she smoke her 10 one she than lit number 11 and was smoking normally again like she was before she got carried away she than looked at them after that "You guys dont have any classes

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MJ "Sally its the summer besides me and Peter got done with college

Sally couldn't believe it has been that long already "Oh its been that long has it oh right I forgot time hasnt ment nothing here to me really I missed out on a lot than after that said Sally took a real big drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth she than inhaled the smoke into her lungs and than into her body she than took another big drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth she than did a nose exhale and than blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth.

MJ took a drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth she than waited for a few minutes than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth "Yea you have but dont worry about it when you get a chance to get out of here we are so going out to do things together you me and Peter we are going to have so much fun

Sally "Really MJ

MJ "Of coarse

Sally " That would be great

Not long after that Peter steped up and than looked at Sally "Sally there is something I got to say

Sally looked at him " What is it Peter ?

Peter looked at Sally "Well Sally this thing I got to say is MJ already knows this she knew this for a while now anyway its something about Spider Man

Sally "Huh what about Spider Man Peter?

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Peter "I am Spider Man Sally

Sally laughed than she took a drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth she than waited for a few moments than she blew the smoke out of her mouth than looked at Peter "Yea right Peter you thats a joke thats the biggest joke I ever heard

MJ "Its not a joke Sally Peter is Spider Man Peter show her your costume and than climb the ceiling or shoot webs

Peter "Ok MJ "after that said he than put on his costume and than shot out a web than after that he jumped on the wall than climbed up until he was sticking to the ceiling "Is this proof enough for you Sally

Sally looked up and she couldnt believe it that he was hanging "Oh my god you werent kidding I thought you guys were playing a joke on me but this isnt a joke is it

MJ "Afraid not Sally hey Peter get out of your costume and come down or come down and than get out

Spider Man looked at MJ "Ok MJ" than he took it off than he climbed back down than he was back to Peter Parker again

Peter "Told you that I was Spider Man

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Sally "Oh my god Peter I had no idea I thought it was all a joke but anyway why did you tell me that I thought a hero was supose to keep his identy until he trusted the people with such a secret

Peter "Well it wasnt my idea to tell you yet it was MJ's

Sally "Oh

MJ "Yea it was mine Sally cause we trust you very much and how much we have been friends but this is bigger than friendship Sally I need to know that you can keep such a secret from anyone else but us only us right now me you and Peter are to know such a secret that it will never leave your lips as long as you live

Sally "I promise that it will never leave my lips or my mind for that matter

MJ "I know we havent heard anything from Max and dont know if he is alive or not but last time Peter almost didnt make to you to save you also I want to know that you wont hold him responsible if he doesnt make it the next time if this event ever happens again that you will never blame him if he doesnt make it to save you

Sally "If that event ever happens to me I will never hold him responsible or blame him if he doesnt make it to save me to know he tried is all that will concern me for now I do thank him for saving me now even if somehow it doesnt help me later.

Peter "I appreciate that Sally.

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Meanwhile Electro was not only recovering himself but he was trying to plan his next move he wanted to do this one right he talked so loudly it was heard through out the whole place even though it was just him there

while he was there plotting the power there flickered in and out and he wondered what was going on cause he didnt do it not long after that something went by him and than he looked in a direction where it went and not long after that something became a figure or something he can see clearly at the time what it was it was a girl a girl that had electric powers he couldnt believe it

After Live Wire showed herself she than looked at him "Hey there I am Live Wire So I hear you want to turn a girl into a electric being like yourself not only that you want to take out a Spider Man well I am your plan than

Electro looked at her he was suprised and yet curious to "I thought I was the only electric being around here and whats your story

Live Wire looked at him "Sorry I dont trust you enough to talk about my personal life anyway if things work out real well for us and if I trust you than I will tell you but right now if you want this girl turned I will help you and this Spider Man taken out I will take him out

Electro looked at her "Anyway I am Electro and its not that simple other wise I would of done it my self anyway right now I am to weak to go I first need to charge up before I go

Live Wire looked at him "sure thing lets get you juiced and than we will work on that plan of yours

Electro "Sounds good

After that he and Live Wire went out and they both got juiced up than she looked at him

Live Wire "So whats the plan our we doing both or one plan at a time

Electro "One plan at a time first I want to turn the girl

Live Wire "Very well lets do it

Electro and Live Wire both headed for the hospital

Peter's Spider sense went off and he hurried up and changed into Spider Man

Not long after that both Electro and Live Wire appeared

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Electro than zapped Spider Man and knocked him down

Live Wire seen both girls there "Which one of these girls is the one

Electro "Sally the one in the bed

Live Wire than looked at her "I see her ok what about this other one what do we do with her

Electro "Take her she is our hostage

Live Wire "Understood" she than charged up a little bit and shocked MJ

MJ felt the shock "Ahhhh uhhhh" the cigarette fell to the ground and than MJ fell not much longer

Live Wire than steped on the cigarette and put it out she than picked up MJ

Electro than went over to Sally than picked her up and than they both took off

they went back to the base

Live Wire than chained up MJ than she walked over to Electro

Electro sat Sally down

Sally still had her cigarette she was to terrifed to even smoke and yet she couldnt move anyway

Electro than went over there he took her cigarette and put it out than he walked back to where he originally was

Sally looked at him terrified "Please Max dont do this let me be let me live my life

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Live Wire looked at him "I see why you wanted her you know her

MJ regain conscienceness and tryed to brake free but couldnt do that

MJ "No Max dont do this

Meanwhile Spider Man was starting to get back up and than he took off webslinging

Back at the headquarters

Electro waisted no time he charged up and started shocking Sally

Sally "Ahhhh noooo please not this not again ahhhhh please I cant take this again my body cant handle this Max this can kill me

Electro "But it wont Sally only if I let it and I am not going to let that happen I love you to much " he than looked at Live Wire "You wanted to help me so help me we need to get this done pronto

Live Wire "I never did this before so how much electric do I use

Electro turnd his head than used one hand and gave Live Wire a little jolt to feel so she knew how much to use "That much

Live Wire felt the jolt "Oh ok I know that much got you now no problem now" she than charged up and than she fired the same amount at Sally

Sally was now getting a double dose of electricity "Ahhhhh nooooooo stop this please ahhhhh

MJ "No stop it please dont do that to her

Spider Man was trying to hurry up and get there he swung in and landed on the ground than tried to charge at them

Live Wire seen that she than looked at him than she used her one hand and her eyes to focus on Spider Man and shot electric at him while she used her other hand to zap Sally

Sally was already starting to get back at the changing into a electric being

Spider Man was knocked down but he got back up and tried again

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Electro couldnt wait he started charging to his full potential

Live Wire see him boost his so she thought it was ok to do the same than she charged up to her full potential and continued also shocking Sally and knocking down Spider Man

Spider Man couldnt move anymore

MJ kept trying to brake free and at the same time yelling out at the top of her lungs

Sally changed more and more

MJ "Stop it

Sally looked at them "Stop it please I beg you

Electro "Its to late if we stop now it will kill you we have to continue now

Sally continued to get shock she couldnt take it "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh than please let me die I have no feeling left in my body

Electro "No Sally I love you I want you to be with me and this is the only way and no one is taking this moment away from me soon just a little more and than we can be together and I can show you how to adjust to this situation its not difficult Sally

Spider Man tried to get closer but he kept getting pushed back and knocked down by the electricity there was no way for him to get to Sally and he knew Sally was almost gone than he jumped on to Live Wire trying to distract her and at the same time was getting electricuted doing so

Sally looked at them she smiled one last time for them for both Spider Man and MJ she than looked at Spider Man "You tried your best Spider Man " after that she fully changed into an electric being like Electro

Electro than stoped than he looked at Live Wire "Ok the process is complete you can stop now

After that Live Wire than stoped to

Not long after that Sally slowly came down back to the ground she stood on the ground she than looked at herself for a moment she still had no feeling yet in her body she looked at Electro

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Sally "You said I would learn to feel I feel nothing

Electro looked at her "You will give it time let your body adjust to the change " he than walked over to her he than hugged her and started kissing her

Live Wire seen that for the moment than she turned to MJ and Spider Man "So what do I do with these two

Electro stoped for a moment "Kill them I have no need for them

Live Wire "With pleasure" Live Wire was getting ready to charge up to finish them both off

Sally seen that than she shot a blast at Live Wire

Electro couldnt believe it "Sally what are you doing

Live Wire stoped for a moment and looked at Sally

Sally "Not on my time you dont both of them are my friends I want them to stay alive you got what you wanted Max let them go

Electro "Its impossible to let them go

Sally "Why is it Max?

Live Wire "Cause we made a deal

Sally "A deal what deal

Live Wire "I met part of his and I have to finish it you see part of the deal was to turn you and the other part was to kill Spider Man I agreed to help him on his terms

Sally "There has to be another way these two our friends of mine cant you change the deal its not done so it can be altered and changed please its bad enough he got me not them let them be Please Max you got me there is nothing more you need to do you wanted me you got me now let them go let everything else that bothered you go you dont need it to bother you anymore if you love me like you said you will for me let them go

Electro looked at her for a moment than he looked at Live Wire "Let them go you did the main part of the deal

Live Wire looked at them for a moment than she turned and looked at Electro "Very well your deal is done" she than did nothing more than that

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Electro than looked at Sally and smiled and than he whispered into her ear "You wouldnt have a problem with me loving her to would you and having her here with us

Sally looked at him "Say no more Max I know what your getting at and no I dont mind if thats what you want

Electro looked at her and smiled "You mean that thank you " he than looked at Live Wire "Hey Live Wire could we have a word with you

Live Wire than walked over

Electro than explained to her his idea

Live Wire "Get out you mean that I would love to

Sally looked at them both and smiled she than looked at MJ she than shocked the ropes to free her "I am sorry about that MJ

MJ "Its ok

Sally "So are we still friends

MJ "We are still friends just sorry I cant shake your hand or hug you for that matter

Sally"Is that right " she than changed into a normal look of herself "Better guess again

MJ "Huh how can you do that?

Sally "I have no idea but I just did ha ha ha hmm mabe we can still hang

MJ "You can count on that Sally

Sally than walked over to MJ and gave her a hug she than let go of MJ she than walked over to Spider Man

Spider Man looked at Sally "I am sorry Sally I tried

Sally looked at him and smiled "Its ok Spider Man dont worry about it you tried your best mabe I wasnt ment to be saved but in any case at least you tried thats all that matters anyway you shouldnt have to worry about Max anymore hopefully I can keep him straight and honest now that he has me hopefully it will be enough for him to stop any futrure situations besides I am sure you guys will see me again anyway just because my normal life is over doesnt mean I wont be around anymore besides I can blend and if thats all I need than thats it" after that said she than looked at MJ "Oh MJ by the way dont forget to tell Peter that sometime we are still going to hang out together ok

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MJ looked at Sally "So how are we supose to I mean how can I reach now

Sally smiles "Well even though I am different now I dont have money to move out of my house yet so I should still be in my original house but if not later I will come by and give you an update on how to reach me than

MJ smiles "Ok well I guess me and Spider Man will leave and me and Peter will be looking foward to seeing you again

Sally smiles "Ok bye MJ bye Spider Man

Spider Man picks up MJ and they swing off

Electro looks at Sally "I cant believe you let them go Sally

Live Wire "Yea really he will be a pain in the ass in the future

Sally "No he wont as long as you two dont plan any evil things he wont be besides you have no reason to now I am going to keep you two honest cause if you dont than I am going to be one upset girl after what you went through to get me its over Max no more if you do anything than no matter what you do you will not have me understand just cause you turned me dont mean nothing you still have to earn it anyway I am going back to my house you two coming you two better be have from now on" after that said Sally started leaving the place

Electro and Live Wire followed behind and they all went home.