Return of Electro me and my cousins version

[Jonathan]

OOC I will be talking about the topics out of character starting with this one on what the storyline will be about
Electro is sore for loosing twice against Spiderman and sore at him for not letting him make Sally be like him now he has 2 objectives to search for and get revenge against Spiderman and to once and for all to get Sally and make her just like him so they can be together

It was a boring rainy day and Peter Parker was at home staying inside to keep out of the rain he was also thinking about wanting to do something than he thought about calling Mary Jane Watson to see if she wanted to go out and do something or come over and spend time so he went over to the phone and picked up the phone and dialed MJ's number

Mary Jane was at home relaxing until she heard the phone ring "Huh the phone who would be calling at this time besides I was later going to go over to see how Sally was doing" MJ walked over to the phone and picked up "Hello"

Peter "Hi MJ

MJ "Oh hi Peter whats up

Peter "Nothing much just wanted to call and asked if you werent busy if you wanted to I dont know do something or go somewhere or you can come over or I could come over that sort of thing

MJ "Well I have plans Peter I was going to go and check on Sally and see if she is ok you can come with me to go see her if you want than mabe after that if its not to late mabe we can do something

Peter "Yea that would be great ok I will be over and than we can go see how Sally is doing

Meanwhile Sally has been in her bed resting for 2 years after what happend to her 2 years ago when Max Dillon who became Electro went after her and tried to change her ever sense than she has lost feelings to her body but she just got her feelings back a year ago but not as good as they should be she still cant do a lot yet she can eat and walk around a little bit but than she has to get back in bed to relax to she hasnt been back to class sense that time she has been trying to recover sense than also sense than she has been having nightmares about that night but would always wake up during the shocking part of it she laid in bed just thinking to herself "I hope I never face that event again cause of that day 2 years ago I havent felt anything sense my body has been so numb I am just starting to get feelings back into my body and right now what I have isnt much I know he hasnt been around for 2 years but I wonder if he is really gone.

[Jonathan]

There were three new face in the city that were spidermans friends there was inuyasha and sesshomaru and shadow. They made their way to peters apartment and decide to go in and wait for him to come home so they got the extra bed rooms ready and they all went to sleep waiting for him to come home.

[Jonathan]

Peter got off the phone and was getting ready to walk out of the apartment when he noticed doors were open in the apartments "Huh thats weard I dont recall leaving any doors open" than Peter walked over than opend the door to see three of his friends sleeping in the bed.

MJ waited at her place for Peter so that they could go to see Sally

Meanwhile Sally still thought about the horrible time she had been through

Felicia Hardy was out for a walk

Racheal decided to come to New York City for a visit sense she had nothing to do for a while

Kanna got better and took her 6 children and went to New York she had no idea where to go but she was looking for a place to stay also she went there so that Naraku couldnt find her she than went to Peter's apartment and knocked on the door

Peter turned around "Huh who could that be" he than walked out of there than he went to his main door than opend it and he seen a little girl with 6 kids "Yes can I help you

Kanna "Yea I was wondering if me and my kids could stay here with you in this apartment until I can get on my feet and work things out to find my own place

Peter was shocked when he heard this "Let me get this straight you want to stay here with me in the apartment until you get on your feet to find another place ok I got that part but I dont get the part about them being your kids when your just a child yourself

Kanna "Thats really a complicated explanation but if you have time I could explain that to you later perhaps but please can we stay here for a while

Peter didnt know what to say at first but to see them as kids he couldnt refuse "Alright at least until you get on your feet.

Kanna "Thank you" and she took all her 6 kids inside and than she went to relax for a moment cause of all the hard work she had to do to get them there and to get inside it was just a lot to do.

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Inuyasha sesshomaru and shadow all woke up and went to see if that was peter that opened the door and they saw him and kanna.

Sesshomaru " for fucking out loud she is not staying here.


Sesshomaru ran over to her and threw her out the window and then he lock the door and started to talk to peter and they told peter that kanna was evil and she tries to trick people into letting her stay place and that she uses the babies to get people to change there minds.

After that they all head over to mj apartment.

[Jonathan]

After Kanna was tossed out she managed to get up in time to save all 6 of her kids from getting hurt to she than looked up at the window she was tossed out of "Sesshomaru you selfish fool I ment what I said if I ment harm I would of done so that was no trick you creep besides if I knew you were there in the first place I would of just left anyway" she managed to say that before they left she sat there on the ground for a moment trying to think of what to do "What do I do now I have been trying to find a place to stay I have never used my kids to trick anyone that brute I know he still holds that grudge against me for the past why does he think I came here for to get away from him and Narkau but than somehow I run into Sesshomaru how will I ever find a place if no one will give me a chance to get on my feet.

Peter than knocked on MJ's door

MJ than went to the door than before answering it "Who is it

Peter "Its me

MJ "Oh there you are Peter" than she went to answer it than she was shocked when she seen three other people with him MJ didnt feel totaly comforatable "Um Peter who are they I thought it was just us going to go see Sally

Peter "Well thats what I thought to but than my friends stoped by so I thought sense they came here that they could come to

MJ "Hello" than she looked back at Peter "I guess they could I just hope Sally feels ok with this well I guess we go see her than so lets go

than they went to Sally's

Meanwhile Sally was relaxing in bed

Felicia Hardy was still out on her walk

Racheal was enjoying her time there enjoying the sites

Meanwhile at the bottom of the water in that grouded mechanisim thing Electro finally broke free a weakend Electro swam back to surface and got out of the water he wasnt happy "I cant believe this I cant believe Spider Man gotten in my way when I was trying to make Sally like me so that we can be together he enterfered with that I will not give up until I get Sally she is mine and mine alone and no one is going to keep me from Sally.

[Jonathan]

While kanna was saying all of that they just pretend that they were listing so that she would shut up. After that they head over to the mj and when they got inside her apartment they look around a little bit and than they took off.

Once they got over to sally's house they all waited by the door and rang the door bell and waited for her to answer it

[Jonathan]

Sally heard the doorbell than she got up and went to the door "Who is there?

MJ answered right away "Its me MJ with Peter Parker and some friends is it ok to come in

Sally "Yea hang on" after that said she than unlocked the door and opend it than she went and laid down on the bed "Forgive me if I dont offer anyone anything to eat or drink but I am not a hundred percent to be doing that kind of things yet I need to lay down on my bed now cause that took a lot out of me to come and open this door

MJ "Thats alright Sally you dont need to push to hard besides if we get hungry or thirsty we will take care of that ourselves besides you should be trying to get better dont ware yourself down than you already are right now you went through a lot 2 years ago anyway other than that event how are you feeling

Sally "I am feeling better than I did anyway but the nightmare from that time is still there"

MJ "Yea I could imagine there are times when I remember that day its something hard to forget to it was a good thing Spider Man took care of him in time we almost lost you

Sally "Yea I know I remember a little more and I would of been completely just like him I cant forget that day cause sense than I had no feelings in my body at all nothing after all of that it just totally shut down and now 2 years later I can move around better now but not enough to do a lot I cant even leave my house right now until I get better enough to walk that far but I am worried though cause it took this long just being able to move again I dont know how long it will take me to fully recover though

MJ "I dont know either

Kanna continued sitting there not sure of what to do she hasnt moved yet from the spot

Racheal was still walking around and enjoying the sites

Felicia Hardy than walked over not to far from where Peter's apartment was and than she seen a girl sitting on the ground with 6 little children than she walked over to her "Hey there whats the matter there?

Kanna "I dont have a place to stay and I need a place where me and my kids can stay until I get on my feet.

Felicia "Huh your kids how can they be your kids if your just a kid yourself?

Kanna "Its complicated please I need a place to stay can you help me out

Felicia " Sure I can help you out you can stay with me as long as you need to

Kanna "Really I can oh thank you thank you so much you are a life saver

Felicia "Ok lets get your little darlings and get you inside follow me

Kanna "Thank you so much

Kanna followed Felicia Hardy to her place and than they went inside

Meanwhile Electro went back to the place where he gathered that much power the last time to recharge himself back up "I will pay Spider Man back for what he did to me and than I will make Sally mine.

[Jonathan]

Everyone was visiting with each other until shadow snuck away and was flying around and seen a shaow object move he than flew over to see what it was he flowed it until it showed itself it was venom he was looking for spiderman. Shadow quickly returned to sally's and told all of them what happened and what he saw so inuyasha,sesshomaru and shadow all went to go search the city in order to find venom.

Meanwhile venom had found peter and and broke in the apartment and threw him outside and then he jumped down into the alley to find him so he kept on looking for him and he was getting anywhere so he closed off the entire area by webbing the exits and anyways up or around things.

Venom " come on out spiderman I know you are here I can smell you. You have to be in the garbage because thats the only way for you to cover up your smell.

Meanwhile Inuyasha,Sesshomaru and Shadow were starting to come back to sally's apartment.

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Sally screamed when she seen Venom "Ahhhh what was that thing

MJ "I dont know whatever it was it knocked down Peter I dont get it why is it hurting Peter what did he do

After Kanna got her kids inside Felicia's place she sat down to relax than after sitting there for a moment she looked at Felicia "I have a question to ask you how do you feel about people who smoke I was just wondering cause I smoke and I was wondering if you have a problem if I smoked in here

Felicia "Well I dont get into those topics cause if thats ones choice in life than thats their choice to make and no I dont if thats what you want to do than please dont let me stop you just let me find you an ashtray if I have one around here" after that she went looking around than she found one "Ah here is one I usually dont use it for cigarettes I had it cause it had a pretty design but anyway here you go.

Kanna looked at it and smiled "Yea its gorgous and thanks" she than took the ashtray and sat it beside her on the stand than she reached into her pocket than she pulled out a pack of cigarettes than she got a cigarette out of the pack than she stuck it in her mouth she than got out a lighter she than flicked the lighter than lit the cigarette after that she stuck the lighter back in her pocket than she put her pack in her pocket she than took a puff than she removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew the smoke out of her mouth than she looked at Felicia "Do you have anything to drink please?

Felicia "Yea what do you want?"

Kanna "What do you have?"

Felicia "Um I have all different kinds of stuff what did you have in mind

Kanna "Do you have any beer or wine?"

Felicia "Um yea but are you sure you dont want any pop or milk or juice or water

Kanna "No mabe later right now if you dont mind I want beer or wine please

Felicia "Sure ok um coming up "she went and got her out a can of beer than she took it to Kanna and sat it down on the stand beside her "You know your the strangest little girl that I did ever see

Kanna "all hard to explain"

Felicia "Well I am sure I have time to hear it

Kanna "Ok if you say so" than Kanna explained her whole story to Felicia

Felicia was shocked when she heard the whole entire story "Wow um so that explains all of that now I am a little worried your not going to hurt me are you I mean after all your a demon

Kanna "If I was going to I already would of plus Naraku isnt here so no your safe if he was here than yea I would be hurting you now I dont know what it is but every time I am around him I just I dont know I just attack without question like I have no conscience I follow his command sense I am just his reincarnation but now without him here or his demons or his puppets I am fine I can be me so now you know the only way I would attack you .

Felicia "I see so what demon are you I mean sorry wrong question I mean as a demon what skills do you have or possess

Kanna "Shhh I dont want my little darlings to hear what I am thats not the life I want for them" after that she took a puff she than removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a moment than she blew the smoke out of her mouth she than looked back at Felicia "Well as that um can you get closer I dont want my little darlings to hear

Felicia got closer and sat beside Kanna

Kanna than got closer to Felicia and than whispered it in her ear "I can put up a barriers and block attacks and also I can take your soul well I can block the attacks and put up barriers with my mirror and take your soul from my mirror or my hand if I choose to" after that she sat back.

Felicia "Oh I see great talents

Kanna "Yea I guess

Racheal continued to walk around and enjoying the sites of the city.

Peter finally regained conscience than thought to himself "Of all the times he had to choose now to come and get me" he than stoped thinking that moment and answered back "Of all the times Venom you had to pick now to come and get me come on Brock I dont have my costume here so there is no way I am going to be able to pull off any suprises of climbing walls and 2 we are in public places so I am not going to just crawl off so webing the walls was not propper at this time you really caught me off guard this time Brock.

[Jonathan]

Venom webbed peter and pulled him close to him now your mine peter park or should I say spiderman now lets finish this he raised his foot and then he dropped his foot and then inuyasha, sesshomaru and shadow dropped in and they broke throw the webbing and broke peter free.

Inuyasha " now peter run and change.

Shadow then jumped up and fired stars at him and venom dodge them and then he jumped down into the sewer and shadow followed him but he lost him.

Shadow " I lost him.

Sesshomaru " lets all go back inside and talk with girls and try to calm down sally and wait there for venom I have a feeling he is coming back.

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Peter "I have to run back to my apartment first cause thats where I left it today" Peter ran all the way back to his apartment than went inside than he went to his room of the apartment than he got out his Spider Man costume than he put it on than went out the window area he than shot out a web and went web slinging.

Felicia "So what will we do today Kanna ?

Kanna took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth she than waited a few minutes than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth she than looked at Felicia "I dont know Felicia I have to take care of my kids to which is difficult for me alone to do that sense their fathers wont help me they dont want anything to do with their kids sense what I am which is understandable but to not take care of their kids which is upseting this job is so hard to do alone" after that Kanna than got the can of beer than she opend it than she took a sip and than sat it down than she looked back at Felicia "I would like to go out and have some fun but I cant do that sense I have no one to watch and take care of the kids cause I couldnt go out alone sense I really dont know this place at all

Felicia "Thats true I guess you would need a guide to help you out if I knew someone who could watch your kids than I would be happy to take you out and we could I dont know find something to do for fun but I have nobody in mind who can help us out with that

As Racheal walked she could sense Kanna near by she than went to where she sensed her than knocked on the door

Felicia "Huh who could that be?" after that she went to the door and opend the door

Racheal smiled "Hi there

Kanna than looked towards the door "Racheal

Racheal "Hey Kanna its been a while good to see you

Kanna "Yea I know how have you been doing how is Rayne and the others

Racheal "I guess everyone is doing fine they were when I left

Kanna "Thats cool

Racheal "Yea I see Naraku still hasnt found you yet cause your still acting how you are

Kanna "Yea I have been lucky for that thank good ness Racheal I got a favor to ask you sense your here I know neither of us have been here long but could you watch the kids for me while I go out with Felicia here I want to go out and have some fun I havent had any fun sense I got here

Racheal "Yea I would watch them for you

Kanna "Thanks a lot you are a life saver

Electro finally reached back at that place and was working on getting recharged

Meanwhile Cletus Kassady was on the loose and was searching for something to do and than he sensed Venom and Spider Man "Ah we sense our dad and Spider Man this is a perfect oppertunity this will be the perfect fun" after that than he changed into Carnage than he went on the search for Spider Man and Venom.

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Inuyasha,Sesshomaru and shadow all left to search the city for venom and any disturbs meanwhile venom had indeed come back and snuck inside to steal sally for electro. Venom then webbed sally and took her to the docks and waited for electro to come long. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru smelled venom aand followed the sent and shadow returned to sally's apartment to see if mj was alright.

Venom " electro where are you. You promised me money and spidermans death if I helped you so show yourself.

Shadow " where did they go mj and are you alright.

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MJ was suprised when Venom took Sally "I dont know it doesn't make any sense I dont know why Venom would take Sally Venom is off his game cause Venom knows Peter is Spider Man so he would know that I love Peter so if he was going after Peter directly I would of been the main target but to take Sally that is a whole new ball game even for him to pull so I wouldnt know and Peter wouldnt either now I mean he would know only one place which where Venom would originally live but I doubt it for him to be even there so other than that I wouldnt know nor would Peter sense Venom knows Peter inside and out he can even block Peters spider sense so all I know this isnt the orignal game Venom is playing so I cant say what he will do or where he will go and I am fine but for the moment Sally isnt we have to find out where Venom took her.

Than Spider Man showed up "Did anyone find out where Venom went

MJ "Peter oh my god are you alright

Spider Man "Yea I am fine MJ where is Sally

MJ Eddie Brock as Venom took her

Spider Man "What Venom showed up here why and why did he take Sally

MJ "I dont know this is a whole new game Peter and I dont like it Venom is not like this normally if he wanted you he would of went for me or your Aunt May but to go after Sally there has to be a reason behind that but what could he want with Sally Sally isnt that close to you she is more closer to me than you Peter than oh no what if Electro is somehow alive

Spider Man "Max Dillion alive that cant be possible could it I mean you even know what I did to him the last time

MJ "I know Peter last time you threw him at the bottom of the water while he was in that trap there was no way he could get out without killing himself but if he did survive than he would be very weak than trying to recharge himself which would be he would be back there again last time we almost lost Sally cause of there Peter I think thats what this is about he is back to finish what he started with Sally

Spider Man "Not only that he would be back to kill me as well cause last time I ruined his chance so Max would have a big grudge against me on that

MJ "Yea thats true to but what did Max offer Venom to bring Sally cause he wouldnt just do it for free so something is up we have to go back to that place to find out

Spider Man "Yea I know alright looks like we are going there

MJ "Indeed back to that place again

Spider Man "What oh no your not going there MJ your going back home for now

MJ "Sally is our friend Peter and I am helping to

Spider Man "Alright but you becareful ok try not to get yourself hurt by Max ok or Brock for that matter

MJ "Ok

Felicia and Kanna than went out after not getting to far she seen Spider Man and them heading off to go somewhere "Hmm wonder where they are going" after that she turned to Kanna "Listen Kanna I think we need to reschedual I need to go off now

Kanna "Um we went to far and I wouldnt know the way back so you cant leave me so I have to go with you

Felicia was suprised and she forgot about that and she didnt have time to aruge about that "Alright fine but whatever you see you keep this secret to yourself ok sense I have no time to take you back home and try to keep up ok never mind I will take you with me you be careful ok its going to be dangerous where I am going" after that Felicia changed into the Black Cat than she picked up Kanna and than they took off to follow Spider Man

Carnage than picked up the scent of Spider Man than also chased after him

Electro got fully charged up and showed up "I didnt forget Venom here the money I owed you and now the two things I had in mind to do to change Sally so me and her can be together and number two to take care of Spider Man.

Racheal watched and kept an eye on the kids

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Venom " nice doing bussiness with you now take care of spiderman and that will cover are deal I'll be watching to make sure you hold up your end of the deal.

Venom then took off and inuyasha and sesshomaru arrived they called for spiderman by sending him a telepathy message. Also shadow arrived right on time they were getting ready to send him a message to.

Inuyasha " we'll wait until spiderman gets here and will fill him in on whats going on.

Shadow " where's sally.

Sesshomaru " inside there.

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Spider Man showed up with MJ after ariving down he than put MJ on her feet than he looked at them "Ok we are here well one thing I can already guess Electro plans to try again on changing Sally's life that much is for sure and him wanting revenge on me is most obvious but what else is this about

MJ "Yea that is a very good question what else can be going on other than that why is Venom involved

Black Cat and Kanna showed up to after Black Cat sat her down and than Kanna kept her distance from them she stayed closer to Black Cat

Black Cat looked at Spider Man "Hey Spider its been a little while whats going on here?

Spider Man "Just the original thing for me to do take out some bad guys and what is she doing here with you? cause the others told me about her and uh

Black Cat "I already know about her she filled me in the details already about everything about what happend and about her its fine with me as long as she isnt bothering me or trying to hurt me I dont care I already told her she can stay with me she is my guest for now at my place until she can get on her feet and when I found out something was wrong I told her to go back to my place but she didnt remember how to get there so I brought her here with me for now besides if anything goes wrong I will take full responsibility on her behalf anyway there is no time to be worrying about her being here whether she is going to help or turn on us or anything about her we got to deal with the problem at hand whatever that is

Carnage "Ha ha ha ha your going to have to deal more than that problem your going to have to deal with us first

Spider Man "Huh Carnage your here to

Carnage "Of coarse except we wasnt involved with what is going on we only got started when we sensed you and our dad Venom so we followed you here

Spider Man "I dont have time for this Carnage this is not a good time

Carnage "Well to bad your going to have to make time with this or its your funeral

Racheal continued to watch and take care of the kids if they were hungry or needed a diaper change or to be burped and all of that while they were out

Electro was looking at Sally not even noticing the guest outside yet "Ah Sally soon I will try again and than soon you and me will be together

Sally "I dont want to be that way Max do you have any idea what I went through sense that day 2 years ago not just the pain you put on me and than loosing the feeling in my body and I still havent gotten all my feelings back in my body yet

Electro looked at Sally "Once you become like me you wont have to worry about loosing feeling again I promise you that once you become like me yea it would take some time to get use to but you will feel again just like you feel now that I promise dont you love me Sally dont you even care

Sally "I do care I do love you Max but I dont want to change to be with you there has to be another way Max please that way is not only risky but it hurts at first Max not only that you shocked me so much the last time I lost feeling in my complete body and am just starting to get feeling back into it please there has to be another way

Electro "There isnt Sally this is the only way I dont want to loose you this is the only way we can be together

Sally "What about the professer huh what was you doing to her you almost killed her Max

Electro "She was a test run Sally to see if it could be done but at the time I didnt do it right and almost killed her but I improved on that Sally I can get it right this time you dont have to worry about death I cant live like this alone I want you to be with me

Sally "I dont want to live like that Max even if its the only way for us I dont want that kind of life.

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Inuyasha then kick open the door and jumped into the air and then inuyasha did his wind scar and cut off electro's arm and then shadow came foem the shadows and took sally outside and then sesshomaru and spiderman team up against carnage and sent hi running.

Sesshomaru " we was patheic.

Inuyasha " time to get out of here my wind scar was to powerful this whole place is go to come down.

Everyone head for the back to sallys place and they dropped off sally there and inuyasha,sesshomaru and shadow all wnet back to peters apartment to relax.

Meanwhile venom went to see if electro was alright so he helped dig him out and then he put him down and then took off.

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Racheal continued to watch them she wasnt all to happy about it though that she was waisting her trip on watching Kanna's kids "Well this has been a great vacation come here to watch Kanna's kids while she goes out with whoever that was well it is great to see her and the kids again though.

Black Cat "I agree lets get out of here than she used a rope cable and than started swinging off she grabbed Kanna and than they split

After they all got back to Sally's place and got her back in bed than Black Cat than again used the rope cable and than took Kanna and left again than after they were out of sight and got back close to home she than landed on the ground she than sat Kanna down and than she changed back to Felicia Hardy and than she looked at Kanna "Ok from here we are walking back ok

Kanna "Ok um oh sorry I dont think we had the proper introduction I mean you know about me and my name but I really dont know nothing about you other than your secret life who are you really I mean the real you not who you go out to be when your doing that

Felicia "Oh thats right we really didnt get to talk did we went out so fast to spend sometime together I forgot the proper introduction forgive me I am Felicia Hardy

Kanna "Its a pleasure to meet you Felicia Hardy so what will we do?

Felicia "I dont know if we go out now they will figure out my identity now sense your with me I really dont know if we can go out now unless we go no where that envolves them thats the only way now

Kanna "Yea thats true now anyway where are we going to go now we didnt get to go somewhere fun

Felicia "Your right we have to do that first before calling it a day I would take you to a bar but because they will not let you in we cant do that so what can be fun hm do you like to go to the mall?

Kanna "The mall what is that?

Felicia "Oh yea you wouldnt know cause of your life I almost forgot a mall is a place where you go to shop you know buy things like clothes and other stuff it would be hard for me to explain it to you how about I show you if they have one wait this is a city I dont think they have that here sorry never mind um I got to think smaller than a mall

Kanna "Oh so much for that I would like to go to a mall what a shame

Felicia "Hm mabe if we go somewhere else sometime mabe if some place has a mall mabe you and me could go sometime

Kanna "Really that would be great

Felicia " Yea but that would be sometime not today well anyway I think we can go to a restauaraunt and eat

Kanna "That works to for today

Felicia "Great lets go

MJ stayed with Sally to comfort her after that little event

Spider Man than swung off but he didnt go far than he changed back to Peter than he went back through the apartment door to check on them

Peter "Are you two alright

MJ acted back to the way she last seen him as Peter infront of Sally "Oh my god Peter your alive thats amazing

Sally "Huh Peter Parker survived but how did you survive against that weard black creature thinging

Peter "I survived because of Spider Man

Sally "So he rescued you to huh

MJ "I see so he has rescued us all at one time or another

Sally "Even you to MJ

MJ "Yea even me its nice to have a superhero watching over all of us and making sure we are safe from those creeps

Sally "Yea I guess

MJ "Whats wrong

Sally "I feel sorry for Max

MJ "Why he tried to make you become like him though

Sally "I know I dont feel sorry for him cause of that I feel sorry for him that he became Electro and I feel sorry that before that I was the only person he cared for and him thinking I am the only one for him before that event that changed him into Electro and I feel sorry for him being lonely that way even though its wrong what he is trying to do to me I do feel sorry for him though and I dont totally blame him I probably would be doing the same thing myself if I was that lonely and in his shoes instead of him

MJ "You know if he is still alive he will be back for you

Sally "I know that if he survived than yes he will be back for me again if he didnt than in death I hope he found his peace that way he wont bother me anymore and than I can put the nightmares he has given me behind me or in other words put the nightmares to rest

MJ "By the way how does the nightmare go anyway?

Sally "Well it goes how it happend just exactly like it did 2 years ago all the event

MJ "Ok sorry to bring this part up but what about the main event of the nightmare

Sally "You mean me getting electricuted and not feeling anything in my body well thats the unknown part really I dont know how it ends cause the shocking part itself terrifies me enough that it wakes me up why does it matter I mean I am still me and normal thats all that matters right.

MJ "Yea I guess your right

Electro awakens to find one of his arms laying on the ground he was very upset he grabed the arm and than somehow reattached it back in place than he looked at the place where it was and seen that it was trashed "Ohhh great now I have to rebuild and fix this place before I again can try and get Sally back ohhh you guys recked everything I will get you Spider Man this isnt over and I will make Sally mine one way or another she belongs to me and me alone she loves me she amitted that she cares the only thing is that this is what separates us and I know she said no about that but she will change her mind I know she will as soon as she understands what its like once she knows that and knows its no different she wont refuse this she is just scare I know it I am scared to for her but I know its going to be alright she just needs to trust me thats all ever sense this happend she became scared of me I am still the same Max Dillion I just got to get her to see it but to get her to see that she has to experience what I do and to do that she has to become what I am than she will understand than she will not be afraid anymore and than we can be together but first I have to rebuild this place and recharge up the machine again which will drain me to get it back online but it will be worth it sense this is the main place to do it and than I will get Sally and change her than go after Spider Man and take him out than after that me and Sally will live together

Carolyn Trainer also known as Dr. Octopus 2 was walking around and she seen the place was destroyed "Hm seems like you have a problem here

Electro turned around and looked at her "Whats it to you

Dr. Octopus 2 "Now now dont be rude to the woman thats going to help rebuild this place for you

Electro "Why would you help rebuild this for me

Dr.Octopus 2 "Cause it makes a good hideout also I thought by helping you with things you can help me in return fair deal

Electro "That depends on your definition

Dr. Octopus 2 "Ok I see that you dont trust me yet to make that deal what would get you to trust me on making that deal.

Carnage than came along "We agree that this place is used for a base we are going to help rebuild it to

Sandra Francess also known as Shriek also appear "I agree this would be a good base for us to use.

Electro "Woa woa this is my base whats the big idea for all of you being here

Carnage got upset he wanted to cut him up into tiny pieces he turned his one hand into a form of an axe and was heading right for Electro

Shriek "Wait Carnage we need him alive I believe if we all work together we can accomplish all our goals " of coarse what wasnt know to Electro that she had control of Carolyn Trainer who was Dr. Octopus 2, she didnt have control of Carnage but when they met up she managed to convice him of a team up to work together after that she walked over to Electro she wanst planning on controlling him but she would if she had to but she was hoping he would join them willingly that way she didnt have to control him to but after walking over to him she knew she couldnt get to close to touch him sense he was all electrical "Well I was thinking that if we all work together we can accomplish our goals you know we all have our plans but we all have one goal in common which would be a perfect team up.

Electro "Really and what goal is that?

Shriek "Well we all want to take out Spider Man dont we and sense you didnt want to hear Carolyn Trainer how about hearing me out huh" she was smiling as she talked "This idea could be very rewarding for us all or" after that she stoped smiling and than got serious "Or this could be very painful for us all what I am saying is I want you to join us fight with us or in other words let us all team up to get rid of them then after that we can go our separate ways if your not comforatable with us around we can do this the easy way or I could make you than you would have no choice but to follow my every command and whatever plans you had you would have to throw them out the window now does that give you a reason or not

Electro "When you put it that way ok so let me guess we just hang together long enough to take Spider Man out than we go separate ways

Shriek "Well that depends if you dont like the team up with us you can do that after we get rid of Spider Man and his friends but if you like working with us after that than you can choose whether you want to continue our team up or not but for now there is no choice in the matter

Electro "Fine agreed there is a girl I want here alive so I can change her so she can be like me so that we can be together forever

Shriek "I take that was your setting goal for later

Electro "Whether its now or later makes no difference thats one of my goals and to take out Spider Man and to take out all the people who have made fun of me when I was normal

Shriek "Fine you can keep to your goals after you help us take out Spider Man besides he is a goal to which we all share and that girl you can have alive than

Electro "So what about you um whoever you all are whats your stories why are you all envolved with what your doing

Carnage "We are Carnage and its just how we are we just kill and destroy we dont care of nothing always been that way

Carolyn Trainer "I am Carolyn Trainer also know as Dr. Octopus 2 I am also planning and working on a research to bring Dr Otto Octavious back to life

Electro "The original Dr. Octopus

Dr. Octopus 2 "Thats right I will do whatever that needs to be done to get enough money to work on that research

Electro than looked at Shriek "What about you whats your story

Shriek "Who I was is not important who I am now is whats important well if your done getting to know our lives shall we get to work now we got stuff to do you know.

[Jonathan]

Inuyasha head out alone to see if anything was wrong with the city and all he found was nothing so it began to rain and he was heading back to peters apartment when he heard people rebuilding something so he followed the sounds and came to where they were and seen electro and all of the other villains so he took off after hearing their converation and he told sesshomaru and shadow then he called peter and told him to what was going on then he also spotted venom on his way back and told peter to meet him and sesshomaru and shadow in the alley next to mj apartment that where they would make their plan.

[Jonathan]

Kanna and Felicia Hardy were heading to the restauraunt so that they could eat

Kanna Hey Felicia I was wondering when we get there and get inside can we go to the smoking section

Felicia "Yea we sure can Kanna um so Kanna about Racheal is she your friend the one watching your kids at my house?

Kanna "Yea well yes and no on that she is only friends to the nice me when I am my demon self than no we are not just like now right now we are friends but the next minute we could be enimies it just depends I guess but right now we are friends

Felicia "I see so its a compicated answer to you thats why you answered yes and no ok just wondered

Peter looked at MJ "MJ I got to go for now I will check on you two later ok and bye Sally

Sally "Bye Peter thanks for stoping by

Peter than ran off after he got far he got back into his Spider Man costume and web slinged off to meet Inuyasha and them

Racheal continued to watch the kids "I wonder how long will they be gone I would like to continue my vacation

Electro and the bad group all worked on rebuilding the place back up and after that they finished it and made some major improvements to it

Electro "Wow it looks real good now better than it originally was

Carolyn Trainer /Dr Octopus 2 "You bet its better than it originally looked we improved on more than just its looks it will be really even harder to tear down now and everything in here is a lot harder to trash to

Carnage "Well thats done now whats the first thing we are going to do we all have a different agenda but we all have one similar thing in common which is we all want to kill Spider Man

Shriek "That is true love that is true we all want Spider Man and his friends dead but what do we do first all our Agenda's or crush the Spider

Electro "I only have one agenda well two to turn Sally into an electrical being like me and two to destroy everyone who made fun of me before I became this electrical being

Shriek "Hmm we really do have something in common even though we all have our separate agenda's we each have been through something terrible that makes us who we are well I dont know about all of us but you and me Electro are alike in a way I mean the events our completely different but the similarity is we had something terrible happen to us that changed our lives forever something to just push the button and trigger an event to change our lives and than wanting revenge on what changed us we have that in common

Electro "How is that I mean you never did share your story

Shriek "I told you dont need to know that story just believe me that its a like just leave it at that

Than Sally looked at MJ "What do you mean you guess that I am right come on MJ I am alive and here why does it matter if the dream finishes or not

MJ "I dont know sometimes it means something if it doesnt finish

Sally "You mean that Max might possibly change me

MJ "It could mean that it doesnt always mean that but it could if you never see the dream finish this could be a warning that it could happen

Sally "Do you believe in that stuff

MJ "I dont know.

Sally "I dont believe in that stuff to ever happen but if it makes you feel better I will let the dream finish the next time I have it so I can tell you what the results were ok will that make you happy

MJ "It would make me relax a little for sure hey I am going to go out for a little bit to go to the store to buy some things do you want anything

Sally "Um I am not sure I mean I dont know what I want right now its hard to say

MJ "Alright well mabe while I am out I will pick something up for us both than ok

Sally "Ok hurry back now I dont really want to be alone to long right now after all thats happend today

MJ "Yea I know what you mean I will hurry back" after that MJ than walked out the door than she walked out of the house than went to the store than she opend the door of the store and walked in she than grabed a cart and started getting stuff that she thought her and Sally could use after she was about done she headed for the cigarettes area she than picked up a few lighters than she picked up a few cartons of Virginia Slim 120's' than she got some ashtrays than she headed for the check out counter after that she paid for everything she got which was a lot of stuff after she got all that stuff she headed back to Sally's she than got all the stuff out than she opend the door to Sally's place than took the stuff inside than she went and took all that stuff and went to Sally's room where she was and than after that sat the stuff down "Hey there I am back now

Sally "Yea I see you are but whats all of that stuff?

MJ smiled "Stuff we are going to need and much on to while we are at it and I also got some things for me

Sally "Hey is it ok that I can see what all you got

MJ "Sure if you want to"MJ than picked up all the stuff she got and than sat them on the bed so that Sally could look through.

Sally went through all but the last bag she was suprised with all that stuff "Wow you were right a lot of stuff that we can much on and to drink wow you covered everything" after that she than looked into the last bag and was suprised at what she had seen that is when she seen the 3 cartons of cigarettes and some lighters and some ashtrays after that Sally stoped looking in that bag than she looked at MJ "I guess this is what you meant when you said you bought something for yourself.

MJ walked over than looked in the bed "Yea that would be the stuff I mentioned that I bought for myself

Sally "I see why is that

MJ "Well I didnt know if you wanted any while I am here so I thought that was all for just me why are you interested in that to

Sally "Well normally I wouldnt be but after all I had been through right now I am not refusing so yea I do

MJ "Oh ok well mabe later I will go back out and buy you some to

Sally "Yea thanks but I got a question I know why I am doing it or should I say going to be doing that but what about you why are you doing that or going to do that

MJ "The exact same reason cause of all the things I have been through in my life

Sally "Oh things happend to you to

MJ "Yea lots of things

Sally "Well mabe than we can talk about it over a cigarette than how about that

MJ "What about your parents wont they find out

Sally "They wont be back for a while so we are good besides they dont even know the stuff thats happend they normally dont check on me anyway cause they think everything is fine cause I dont get into trouble or anything

MJ "Do they know about this event about you

Sally "No they dont even know that

MJ started getting into the bag she than got out a plastic box that had a lighter in it than she opend it than she opend up one of the cartons and took a pack out than she looked at Sally "You mean they had been gone for two years

Sally "Yea they have

MJ than unwraped the pack than she got the pack opend than she took out two cigarettes than she got onto the bed and sat down than she got out an ashtray than she handed a cigarette towards Sally "Why have they been gone that long

Sally took the cigarette than she looked at MJ "They were first on business trips now they were on a vacation so they wont be back for atleast another mabe a year in a half

MJ than handed the lighter to her and as she did that she gave a shocking expression "Another year and a half

Sally took the lighter she than looked at MJ "Yea the earlyest the latest another 2 years" after that said Sally flicked the lighter than she lit the cigarette she than handed the lighter back to MJ than after that she took a puff she than removed the cigarette from her mouth she waited for a few seconds than she blew the smoke out of her mouth.

MJ than flicked the lighter she than lit her cigarette than she stuck her lighter in her pocket she than stuck her pack in her pocket she than took a puff she than removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few seconds to than she blew the smoke out of her mouth after that she than reached into her bag she than opend up another lighter than brought it out than handed it to Sally than she got back into the bag than she took out a couple packs than gave them to Sally "There you go you can have those oh I forgot one more thing" she than reached back in and got another ashtray out than she handed it to Sally "Those will be urs.

Sally "Really thank you so much" after that said Sally than put the ashtray her lighter and her two packs of cigarettes under the bed.

MJ "No problem" after that MJ explained everything to Sally about her life

Sally was shocked to hear everything that happend "Oh my god so that is why you bought the cigarettes I thought it was just cause of now but it sounds like this was from not only now but for what happend in the past

MJ "Yea it is I have been through so much and had so much stress it all bothers me

Sally "I see

Kanna and Felicia finally made it to the restauraunt and than they went inside after that they both went and sat down in the smoking section

After sitting down Kanna than took out her pack of cigarettes and her lighter and sat them on the table than she got the ashtray and moved it close to her than she took out a cigarette than she stuck it in her mouth she than took the lighter than she flicked the lighter than she lit the cigarette than she sat the lighter back down than she took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew the smoke out of her mouth

Felicia just watched her that moment and smiled "I see you couldnt wait till we got here huh

Kanna "Yea I couldnt wait to light up

People stared at Kanna they were in shock they couldnt believe that they were seeing a little girl smoking.

[Jonathan]

Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and shadow began to make a plan on what to do before spiderman got there. Spiderman finally got there and they filled him in and told him the plan sesshomaru and inuyasha went to started a fight with the villians and shadow and spiderman wnet to get venom and lead him back to the rest of the villians and then they would all be bunched up and they could take them out.

Inuyasha " sesshomaru were here get down.

Sesshomaru " shut your fucking mouth don't tell me what to do we are here to started trouble anyways so lets do it.

Inuyasha fired his wind scar and sesshomaru fired a lighting blast from the tokyjin and they both went behind the building and waited forthem to come to them. The blast cut off a side of the place.

Meanwhile shadow and spiderman chased venom right to his home then they attack him sending him running they guide him right to inuyasha and sesshomaru. Shadow and spiderman met up with them and they went also behind the building to wait. Venom was already pissed off so when he seen them he wasn't to happy and was getting ready to fight them.

Shadow this is perfect we let them fight and then when there all wore down we come in and mob the floor with them.

[Jonathan]

MJ "Yea anyway so what shall we do hmm mabe I should of rented us some movies to so we can be intertained" after that said she took a drag after that she removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a moment than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth

Sally took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth "I dont know I guess but I think we are fine just talking and you being here with me is enough to start with right now I mean you dont have to do a lot for me just cause I cant do anything anyway why dont we start you know getting into our food or snacks or our drinks you got.

MJ "Great idea why dont we lets see what we got that will work for us right now

Kanna looked at the people "Whats your problems do you guys got problems or something please stop looking at me.

All the bad guys came running out they all started attacking

Shriek fired a sonic blast at the good guys

all the good guys would have to be careful cause Shriek is able to tap into people's minds, and bring out their inner darkness (fears, anger, hate), making them act in violent and evil manners. She can also use her powers to fly and to levitate objects/people, as if she has weak psionic abilities. In fact, that would explain her darkness powers as well.

[Jonathan]

Sesshomaru " she doesn't affect me.

Inuyasha ran over to the blast and did his back lash wave and sent it back at her. Sesshomaru than ran up to her and drawed his sword then he hit her with it and sent her flying back into the building. Venom then attack her and shadow and inuyasha started to attack the others and spiderman was slowly coming.

Kagome,sango and miroku all showed up and began to attack as well.

Inuyasha " my friends are here now you guys are going to pay. Wind scar.

His blast hit the building again and damage it some more.

[Jonathan]

Shriek jumped out of the way than she levitated Kagome and tossed her right infront as the backlash wave which was also sending Shrieks attack back as well "Oh nice going hero your just about to make one of your friends suffer ha ha ha well done I didnt know you had a killer instinct in you

all the bad guys started attacking

Spider Man was on the way as well to fight

Electro looked at the others "I will be back there is something I got to do " than he took off for the moment

Meanwhile time went on and both Sally and MJ finished their cigarettes

Sally "So what do we eat chips cookies regular food but if we eat any you will have to do the cooking

MJ "That is true thats why we are just going to be eating snacks for now

Electro appeared and managed to capture both MJ and Sally and took them both and than went back to the base with them

Kanna still seen the people staring at her than she just stoped looking at them "Well I cant stand it but if they want to watch than they can watch I dont care" after that said she than took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth she than waited for a few moments than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth

Felicia "Yea that is good just ignore them besides there is not a lot they can do even if they dont like what they are seeing you are old enough

Kanna "Damn straight

the waiter came along and brought them a menu and than walked off


Electro than chained them up in the base than he got back out and told the others to come back in

after that they all went inside

MJ looked at Electro "Max what are you doing with us

Electro "You should know I want Sally you your just a hostage that I can do what I want with I can also do the same thing to you or I could just kill you or I dont know I havent decided but you are going to watch the show to see what beautiful electric being that Sally will become "Elcetro than looked at Sally "Its time Sally time for you to join me now" after that said than he started to charge up than he started shocking Sally

Sally "Ahhhh no not this again Max please.

Electro than charged up even more and continued

Sally "Please I am loosing feeling in my body again Ahhhhhhhhhhh

Sally's body was filled with electrical energy surrounding her as it was electricuting her and little by little again changing her slowly little by little into an electrical being.

The other bad guys got close to Electro Sally and MJ but than they all went by MJ

MJ "Stop it Max please there has to be a part of you left inside that doesnt want this for Sally

Electro "I want her MJ shut up and stay out of this.

[Jonathan]

Kagome was hit and while she was being hit she used a spirit arrow to save herself while she was in the air it act as a barrier and she was cut up a little bit then miroku and sango took her back behind a building and inuyasha was pissed off and thencharged up and the building and did a wind scar and then knock open the door and then he went in and sesshomaru followed and so did shadow.

Shadow " come on spiderman the doors open.

Inuyasha shut off the power and cut off electros power source and canceled the plans of electro and then shadow came fom behind and got sally and then they all returned to peters apartment .

Inuyasha " his kagome alright.

Sango " she tried to save herself but it was a little to late.

Inuyasha " no it can't be sesshomaru bring her back to me now.

Sesshomaru " fine but I 'm only doing this because you saved rin before so don't expect this again.

Kagome was brought back to live with the tensiga and after that they all relaxed waiting trying to figure out what to do.

[Jonathan]

Spider Man than took off his costume than went back to being Peter Parker than he went and put Sally in his bed for now and laid her down after that he went back to the others

Peter "What can we do

MJ than reached into her pocket she than took out her pack of cigarettes she than got out a cigarette than she put her pack back into her pocket than she got out her lighter she than flicked the lighter than she lit the cigarette after that she put the lighter back into her pocket than she took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth "Is she alright Peter and what are we going to do?

Peter was shocked when he seen MJ get out a cigarette and light it and he was shocked that she was smoking but he didnt say much on the smoking subject cause of all that was going on "Well its hard to say right now on how Sally is doing"

MJ "What do you mean its hard to say well did we save her from becoming an electrical being is what I want to know

Peter "Yea we did that but her body condition from the electrical shock is hard to say for all we know she may have lost complete feeling in her body again

MJ "If that is so than its possible she will be out again for a long while oh poor Sally

Felicia looked at the menu first after she was done she than handed it to Kanna

Kanna took a drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few seconds than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth than she took the menu and started looking through after that she got done looking

After that the Waiter came back and took their order

Felicia and Kanna both told him what they wanted than the Waiter took the menu than left and now Felicia and Kanna were both waiting on their drinks to

[Jonathan]

Everyone was still relaxing and weren't sure on what to do and so they decide they would wait and let the enemy make their move.

Inuyasha " lets out for some drinks sesshomaru you can come to shadow. We'll be back peter.

Venom made it back to his home and climbed into bed and went to sleep until next time.

[Jonathan]

Racheal did everything she was able to do to take care of the children while Kanna was out

The waiter came back with their drinks after that the waiter took off Kanna took a drag she than removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth "Hopefully the food wont take long.

Felicia "It shouldnt take long for them to bring the food hey Kanna can I have one of those cigarettes?

Kanna "Sure if thats what you want" she than got out a cigarette and than got her lighter than handed them to Felicia

Felicia took them and smiled "Thank you" after that she took the cigarette and the lighter she than stuck the cigarette in her mouth than she flicked the lighter she than lit the cigarette than she handed the lighter back to Kanna than she took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth than she waited for a few moments than she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth

Peter "Yea I know I feel sorry for Sally to but the best thing we can do is hope for the best for Sally thats all we can do MJ

MJ looked at Peter "I know Peter its still just terrible though " after that said she than took a drag than she removed the cigarette from her mouth than after that she blew a big cloud of smoke out of her mouth "So what do we do Peter?

Peter "Well right now what we can keeping an eye on Sally and protecting her for right now is all we can do

Meanwhile Electro was pissed off "This is not over Sally will be mine one way or another you cant hold me back forever I will get her and there wont be a thing you guys will do about it.

The other badguys looked at Electro "Stop your complaining we are all still here its not over yet we will get her back and you will get to do what you want to do with her and we will take Spider Man and his friends out one way or another this battle is not yet over.

[inuyasha]

inuyasha and sesshomaru and also shadow were drinking and were getting a little drunk and next thing you knew inuyasha could smell venom near by so he told sesshomaru and shadow and they went around back and slowly started to move in closer to attack venom.

[Jonathan]

Racheal continued to do her best to watch the children

Kanna and Felicia continued to smoke as they waited for their food

Mary Jane walked over to Peter and than hugged him "Oh Peter what if watching her wont be enough I mean neighter of us can watch her like that all the time so its possible for Max to get her as long as he is around she will never be safe from him I dont know what we can do Peter watching her isnt enough we have to some how stop Max before its to late it wont matter where she goes he will track her down and he will finish what he started with her

Peter "I know MJ but for now there isnt anymore we can do

Meanwhile Electro was planning to try again sometime while the other villains planned their moves on what they are going to do.

[inuyasha]

they moved in and then venom jumped up and fled and was heading for mary jane. They started to flow him and called peter and told him to get ready to fight.